Jul-16-2012, 09:19 AM (UTC)
huh... long time since these beings last posted here...
The story is now taking form more, though the sections written so far will possibly have to go through another rewrite to fit with the renewed background material.
These beings have now added quite a bit more to that, including a reworking of most sub-species to some degree. The Settled Sub-species were too tame (aside from the vampiric deep-dwellers)... 'thul merged two of them because they were to similar and simple to be true sub-species, then added one new sub-species, the Eddekin.These share at least a few traits with spiders, which 'thul thinks makes for an interesting species...
The story is now taking form more, though the sections written so far will possibly have to go through another rewrite to fit with the renewed background material.
These beings have now added quite a bit more to that, including a reworking of most sub-species to some degree. The Settled Sub-species were too tame (aside from the vampiric deep-dwellers)... 'thul merged two of them because they were to similar and simple to be true sub-species, then added one new sub-species, the Eddekin.These share at least a few traits with spiders, which 'thul thinks makes for an interesting species...