Greft - Revision history

BelleFree at 05:23, 7 March 2012

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Lady Laura at 16:16, 17 March 2011

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Lady Laura at 16:57, 16 March 2011

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Lady Laura at 16:57, 16 March 2011

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Lady Laura at 16:56, 16 March 2011

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 Eventually, Greft tries to demand blood from [[Kalo]], which prompts his dragon to revoke his keeper status. Without the guidance of Kalo, the changes within his body begin to kill him. Though no conclusive evidence has been given to support it, it is quite possible that [[Kalo]], or another [[dragon]], intentionally made Greft's changes deadly after the revocation.
-Greft tries to escape, and steals [[Sedric Meldar]]'s vials of dragon blood, in the hopes of returning to [[Trehaug]] and selling them. Sedric and [[Carson]] follow him, and find that he has been fatally attacked by a [[gallator]]. His body is surrounded by Sedric's empty vials; the dragon parts did not save him from death.
+Greft tries to escape, and steals [[Sedric Meldar]]'s vials of dragon blood along with a substantial portion of the travellers' supplies from [[Tarman]], in the hopes of returning to [[Trehaug]] and selling them. Sedric and [[Carson]] follow him, and find that he has been fatally attacked by a [[gallator]]. His body is surrounded by Sedric's empty vials; the dragon parts did not save him from death.
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 Among the original dragon keepers, he is the oldest and the one most heavily marked by the [[Rain Wilds]].
-Early on he fashioned himself the leader of the keepers, but did not really succeed, since not all were willing to follow him. The hunter [[Jess]] duped him into thinking that dragon parts should be sold, which caused the dragons to take a strong dislike to him.
+Early on he fashions himself the leader of the keepers, but does not really succeed, since not all are willing to follow him. His methods are proven by his actions to be motivated selfishly; on one occasion he steals the credit for [[Thymara]]'s hunted elk, and when the keepers lose most of their equipment in a storm, he does not share what remains to him.
-Greft had slept with his fellow dragon keeper [[Jerd]] numerous times, and it is possible that he was the father of her mis-carried child.
+Greft eventually pairs off with his fellow dragon keeper [[Jerd]], with whom he has slept numerous times, and it is possible that he is the father of her miscarried child. Even though he feels some uncertainty on this point himself, Greft claims the unborn child as his own, in what he expresses to some of his fellows as an effort to keep the peace among the other keepers.
-Greft tries to escape, and steals [[Sedric Meldar]]'s vials of dragon blood, in the hopes of returning to [[Trehaug]] and selling them. Sedric and [[Carson]] follow him, and find that he has been fatelly attacked by a [[gater]].
+Greft's methods of "leadership" offend [[Thymara]]. He urges her several times to choose a mate; Thymara feels strongly that she will select her own mate, if she chooses one at all, rather than decide based on what Greft argues is best for the group.
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 Greft had slept with his fellow dragon keeper [[Jerd]] numerous times, and it is possible that he was the father of her mis-carried child.
-Greft tries to escape, and steals [[Sedric Meldar]]'s vials of dragon blood, in the hopes of returning to [[Trehaug]] and selling them. Sedric and [[Carson]] follow him, and find that he has been fatelly attacked by a gater.
+Greft tries to escape, and steals [[Sedric Meldar]]'s vials of dragon blood, in the hopes of returning to [[Trehaug]] and selling them. Sedric and [[Carson]] follow him, and find that he has been fatelly attacked by a [[gater]].
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 Greft had slept with his fellow dragon keeper [[Jerd]] numerous times, and it is possible that he was the father of her mis-carried child.
-Greft tries to escape, and steals [[Sedric Meldar]]'s vials of dragon blood, in the hopes of returning to [[Treuhang]] and selling them. Sedric and [[Carson]] follow him, and find that he has been fatelly attacked by a gater.
+Greft tries to escape, and steals [[Sedric Meldar]]'s vials of dragon blood, in the hopes of returning to [[Trehaug]] and selling them. Sedric and [[Carson]] follow him, and find that he has been fatelly attacked by a gater.
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 Greft had slept with his fellow dragon keeper [[Jerd]] numerous times, and it is possible that he was the father of her mis-carried child.
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-'''Greft''' was the human/[[Elderling]] keeper of the dragon [[Kalo]].
+'''Greft''' was the human/[[Elderling]] keeper of the [[dragon]] [[Kalo]].
 Among the original dragon keepers, he is the oldest and the one most heavily marked by the [[Rain Wilds]].
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 Eventually, after trying to demand blood from [[Kalo]], his keeper status was revoked and the changes within his body began to kill him. Though no evidence has been given to support it, it is quite possible that [[Kalo]], or another [[dragon]], intentionally made his changes deadly after the revocation.
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 Greft was the human/[[Elderling]] keeper of the dragon [[Kalo]].
-Among the original dragon keepers, he is the oldest and the one most heavily marked by the [[rain wilds]].
+Among the original dragon keepers, he is the oldest and the one most heavily marked by the rain wilds.
 Early on he fashioned himself the leader of the keepers, but did not really succeed, since not all were willing to follow him. The hunter [[Jess]] duped him into thinking that dragon parts should be sold, which caused the dragons to take a strong dislike to him.

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	Among the original dragon keepers, he is the oldest and the one most heavily marked by the rain wilds.		Among the original dragon keepers, he is the oldest and the one most heavily marked by the rain wilds.